The sun is shining on my face as I jump into the warm water, the sand between your toes sticking to your wet scuffs.
AUTUMN March, April, May
Leaves falling from each tree as I walk past the mist in the air, wishing it was spring.
Winter June, July, August
The cold breeze was washing around, the warm fire trying to get close to the dark clouds dripping with rain and snow.
Spring September, October, November.
The flowers are blooming as I walk past them, the sun is out, the green leaves come back as the snow disappears and my wish finally came true.
Hi Ruby!
ReplyDeleteI think your poems are really great
Maybe you could add more describing words to make it a bit more interesting
Anyway good job!
Hi Ruby its Jaimee from matawai school. I am a new year 7 student,
ReplyDeleteI love how descriptive you writing is keep going like that and you might be a author one day.
Thanks Jaimee