😛Laila's Birthday 15/4/2020
On the 15th of April 2020 my sister Laila had her ninth birthday. It was so much fun. After we got up at 5 o'clock we opened her presents. She got a gorgeous necklace, some hair products, and a photo album of when she was little. Once it was about 7 o'clock in the morning Dad made Laila breakfast in bed. She had bacon and eggs on toast with a delicious smoothie.
We got ready for our day , had a fun ride on the quad bike and then did an egg and spoon race. I dropped my egg a couple of times. Then we had some candy, as we were waiting for lunch. We did some reading and prodigy then we had our delicious lunch which was sausages, marshmallows, dips, vegetable sticks, sausage rolls, sticky buns and cookies (Mum and I made the sticky buns and cookies).
We had a run outside, went on the swing, had another quad bike ride then it was about 6 o'clock and we had spaghetti bolognese for dinner and then had the cake. At that time we were facetiming our nana and poppa and our aunty Emma. Knox was smiling at the colours on the cake we watched a movie and me dad and Summer slept out in the lounge and Laila and mum and Knox slept in mums bed.Iit was so much fun Laila had the happiest birthday ever, she said.
By Ruby
I like your story Ruby especially all the adjectives you have to describe things like 'delicious', 'gorgeous', those help to make your story more interesting and add detail for the reader. It sounds like you all had a great time celebrating Laila's birthday. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteHi Ruby. You used good descriptive words in your story, it was a good recount of Laila's birthday and your family made it a fun filled day for her during lock down.
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